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Hows everyone doing been a while.!
| currently broke but payday will be coming soon so im happy, i can finally buy games
| I'm well
Couldn't you tell?
I've long been away
Prolly not back to stay
Got bored with danger/u
Like y'all do too
My schedule is tight
and that makes it right
to find my release
I'll come an' go as I please
-Rapgurl
| Wow didn't expect to see rapgurl here
| >>595440 >>4881af
Yo Rapgurl,
I like how you milk your game.
Did you not like Cereal Experiments Lain?
You must more prefer the game of the 2D plane.
I believe this is true as much as the sky is blue.
While that higher place may not be heaven, but it sure is VA11HALLA
But check out the sequel, because it will be N1RVANNA
Wrapping is fun, it's definitely a gift.
But I am not as bright as the sun, so I am done with this.
-Wrapgurl
| rapg/u/rl !
ヽ(^。^)ノ
| I'm not ok but I'll be fine. Reality is really fucking weird.
| Constructive criticism: >>595440
It's not bad, but the rhymes are structured like a poem. Try to imagine the lyrics actually being rapped or rap them and you'll realise that rhyming a-a, b-b, c-c and so on only works at a slow pace.
Constructive criticism: >>595532
You've got some fun wordplay, but the pacing is all over the place. You would have to change style and tempo constantly to make it work, and, well, doing that doesn't work.
Love what you're doing though! Keep it up!
| I decided to stop giving a fuck about the world and focus on my inner struggles, in other words I rejected politics so I can stay sane in this world full of idiots who blindly follow their ideologies
| >>595553 but don't get me wrong I'm truly focusing on myself, unlike these MGTOW fools who blame everyone else for their hardships while only pretending to be doing any self-improvement
| >>595553
Politics are fucked man. I find it interesting, and if I'm talking with the right people I can have fun talking about it even if we disagree, but politicians and close minded people ruin it.
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