Post number #771664, ID: 24cd1c
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Hi, I'm here again. Still not earning money, and still only posting this so I can get some feedback from the g/u/rls here so I can improve and hopefully one day get to that point. Her it is: https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/4bN4J
Let me know what you think. Good and bad. In simple terms or technical term. Anything that could potentially help me improve would mean a lot to me.
Post number #771679, ID: f8e8bf
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Can't hear the voice. Need lyrics. Beat is fire. Obviously need a better mic, there is some fuzzy static going on. To me it seems like you are mumbling. Redo it, I can't critique the song properly.
Post number #771681, ID: f8e8bf
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Listening to it to a second time, I can understand the lyrics more clearly, but ehhh.....
Post number #771700, ID: 24cd1c
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>>771679>>771681 The "static" as you call it is effects that have been added on for aesthetic, and not actually static. Same with my voice tone. It's intentional. With microphone, I'm using a studio mic in a small studio. That's the best quality I can get around here. So, I don't think I'll redo it, sorry. But I do appreciate the feedback, and I acknowledge that it's not for everyone. For the lyrics, I can put them up somewhere and share the link if you want. Wouldn't be a problem.
Post number #771704, ID: 24cd1c
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You're damn right the beat is fire though! I love the homie who makes those. Insanely talented, but explicitly states that they don't want to be credited. It's honestly a shame.
Post number #771950, ID: 5c34fa
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The beat is great, but I'm really not a fan of the vocals. Kinda sounds like a surly high schooler mumbling at me and I don't like it.
Post number #771953, ID: 6259b5
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>>771950 Aight. Can't really change my voice, but that's good to know.
Post number #771961, ID: 5c34fa
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But you just told that other guy the tone was intentional, no? I'm sure there are probably people out there that might enjoy that, but you asked for feedback and that's mine.
Post number #771970, ID: 6259b5
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>>771961 Oh, tone. Of course. Thought you meant the voice itself. My bad. And, yeah. I ain't mad. When I said it's good to know I meant that. I want to know everything people might like and might dislike about it. That's how I can improve, or at least know which demographics to sell myself to. I'm glad you gave me your feedback. I apologize if it came off any other way.
Post number #772034, ID: b9da27
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I wanna be honest, this isn't normally my kinda music. BUT... the rhythm is awesome, and your voice blends well with the setting the music sets. Thanks for sharing g/u/rl.
Post number #772053, ID: 32f198
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>>772034 I'm glad! Thank you for the feedback.
Post number #772066, ID: 1ece1f
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basic and bland
Post number #772106, ID: 13045f
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Hello,
Wondering if you accepted guest posts on your site. Also would you be willing to insert links in existing posts?
How much would you charge for this?
Justin
Post number #772115, ID: 32f198
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>>772066 How could I make it less basic and bland, and which parts make it basic and bland?
Post number #772116, ID: 32f198
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>>772106 Fuck is this?
Post number #772174, ID: 89e59d
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>>772115 Hmmm... I wonder... What about that part where you're a tranny? KAHN!
Post number #772187, ID: 32f198
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>>772174 One of those, huh? Good luck.
Post number #772188, ID: 418e23
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>>772187 different people
Post number #772198, ID: 8b4906
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>>772188 samefag
Post number #772204, ID: 32f198
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>>772188>>772198 Either way, let's not go down that route. I'm just looking for ways to improve my music.
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| Hi, I'm here again. Still not earning money, and still only posting this so I can get some feedback from the g/u/rls here so I can improve and hopefully one day get to that point.
Her it is:
https://soundcloud.app.goo.gl/4bN4J
Let me know what you think. Good and bad. In simple terms or technical term. Anything that could potentially help me improve would mean a lot to me.